You’ve polished your query.
You’ve written and rewritten and gashed and sliced and crushed and minced and salt-and-peppered (and baked at 400 degrees for 35 minutes: serves one agent, ideally) your pitches. You have one of these formats for each:
- COMP X COMP [or situation/noun/etc.]
Character is in situation. But when X happens, character must decide whether to do one thing or the other. #hashtags
2. COMP X COMP